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MacGyverGirl wrote: ↑Fri Mar 31, 2023 3:59 am

bluegirl wrote: ↑Thu Mar 30, 2023 7:07 am
Thanks a lot for your feedback on Breaking Point! Getting into Mac´s head was exactly my intention - especially during this first story I wrote. Have you just started reading, and is Breaking Point the first one you´re reading? Because I did a 'revised' (not a complete re-write, but a polish-up) version of Breaking Point and its follow-up Point of No Return - but those are only available on fanfiction.net and AO3! My username there is MacsBluegirl...

I´d also love to hear more detailed feedback - if you do wanna share more of your thoughts concerning my stories...

I just finished chapter 5. Reading a chapter or 2 a night. This is the first one I am reading. I'm reading the one dated February. 2020.

Absolutely will share. Should I comment in that forum?

I guess, you´d better comment in the story thread, or via PM, or - if you want to switch to reading the revised/newer version on fanfiction.net - you can leave comments for each chapter on that site, even as a guest.

Breaking Point was the first story I´ve written in English, it´s followed by Point of no Return (which picks up all the loose ends I left at the end of Breaking Point), then I turned to a completely different storyline for my third one - Point Of View. The fourth (Starting Point) is in the last stages of getting ready for posting... it´ll be only a few weeks from now.

I am watching this episode now and I can't agree more with this quote!

"You have the nicest smile of anybody I've ever known."

MacGyverGirl wrote: ↑Sat Apr 01, 2023 3:50 pm I am watching this episode now and I can't agree more with this quote!

"You have the nicest smile of anybody I've ever known."

Two Times Trouble - but that´s Roxie saying that line - not MacGyver. We did stick to quotes given only by Mac... but yeah, I´d agree as well.

bluegirl wrote: ↑Sat Apr 01, 2023 7:13 pm

MacGyverGirl wrote: ↑Sat Apr 01, 2023 3:50 pm I am watching this episode now and I can't agree more with this quote!

"You have the nicest smile of anybody I've ever known."

Two Times Trouble - but that´s Roxie saying that line - not MacGyver. We did stick to quotes given only by Mac... but yeah, I´d agree as well.

I thought it had to be a Mac quote. I should've gone back to the beginning to re-read the rules. Thanks for the clarification.

Your turn.

It's supposed to be something that MacGyver said - Like:

"Everyone forgets something . . . once in a while."

bluegirl wrote: ↑Sat Apr 01, 2023 9:03 pm It's supposed to be something that MacGyver said - Like:

"Everyone forgets something . . . once in a while."

Makes sense!

Every time she smiles?

MacGyverGirl wrote: ↑Sun Apr 02, 2023 2:27 am

bluegirl wrote: ↑Sat Apr 01, 2023 9:03 pm It's supposed to be something that MacGyver said - Like:

"Everyone forgets something . . . once in a while."

Makes sense!

Every time she smiles?

Yesss - correct!

This quote I can relate to, as I'm staring at a basket of unfolded laundry.

"I never seem to get around to folding."

MacGyverGirl wrote: ↑Mon Apr 03, 2023 2:39 am This quote I can relate to, as I'm staring at a basket of unfolded laundry.

"I never seem to get around to folding."

"Runners"

Runners is correct!