I guess, you´d better comment in the story thread, or via PM, or - if you want to switch to reading the revised/newer version on fanfiction.net - you can leave comments for each chapter on that site, even as a guest.MacGyverGirl wrote: ↑Fri Mar 31, 2023 3:59 amI just finished chapter 5. Reading a chapter or 2 a night. This is the first one I am reading. I'm reading the one dated February. 2020.bluegirl wrote: ↑Thu Mar 30, 2023 7:07 am
Thanks a lot for your feedback on Breaking Point! Getting into Mac´s head was exactly my intention - especially during this first story I wrote. Have you just started reading, and is Breaking Point the first one you´re reading? Because I did a 'revised' (not a complete re-write, but a polish-up) version of Breaking Point and its follow-up Point of No Return - but those are only available on fanfiction.net and AO3! My username there is MacsBluegirl...
I´d also love to hear more detailed feedback - if you do wanna share more of your thoughts concerning my stories...
Absolutely will share. Should I comment in that forum?
Breaking Point was the first story I´ve written in English, it´s followed by Point of no Return (which picks up all the loose ends I left at the end of Breaking Point), then I turned to a completely different storyline for my third one - Point Of View. The fourth (Starting Point) is in the last stages of getting ready for posting... it´ll be only a few weeks from now.