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- Fri Dec 17, 2021 7:40 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Wow, the plot is really thickening. I can only imagine how frustrated Mac must be with all that research turning up nothing! I hate how they keep saying there isn't any imminent danger...that makes me think there IS!! And I wish Mac would start noticing that dark sedan. I don't quite understand why ...
- Sun Dec 12, 2021 11:08 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
It's great to see Mac, Pete, and Nikki working together again! I'm glad Nikki found Mac and you do a great job describing his physical experiences after regaining consciousness. Nikki's reaction when Mac tells her he's still going to the meeting is very in-character. So is Pete's when he learns abou...
- Fri Dec 10, 2021 7:35 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Awww, Mac and Nikki went on a romantic date! And he wore a suit without being told to! It must be love!!! I like how you summarize the summer, the time rebuilding Pete's cabin (nice touch, by the way), and the date from both their viewpoints. Yes, they are both definitely independent and need time a...
- Sun Dec 05, 2021 11:14 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Good for them!! They were late...with a very good reason!!!! I love the little bantering between them in Pete' office...it's so much a part of both their characters it needs to stay even in this 'new' relationship. Well, we all know Mac won't take Pete's advice about taking it easy. Wonder how Mac i...
- Sun Dec 05, 2021 4:19 am
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
- Replies: 201
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Very nice chapter. The beginning is typical Mac with the TV western and couch-sleeping. Good job getting him into his actual bed, by the way!! I like how you provide us with insight into Nikki as she stays and looks around Mac's apartment (good details, here) and then muses in the chair. Darn that D...
- Tue Nov 30, 2021 1:17 am
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Mac thinks too much! Now he gets all worried about the reality of his feelings when Nikki is finally accepting and happy about them! I am impressed that Mac managed to actually relax for 10 whole days and it's sweet that he and Nikki agreed to use that time, as well as their day in Vienna, to explor...
- Sat Nov 27, 2021 8:21 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
- Replies: 201
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
First of all, it's good to know that everything, mission-wise, is going well. Very nice summary at the beginning...thank you for that! Of course the GRU agents are still out there and I'm pretty sure we haven't seen the last of them, but at least we get a break!! Hmmm...Mac, stay put for a week??? G...
- Mon Nov 22, 2021 7:39 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Mac is really in bad shape!! Again your descriptive writing really makes it feel "real". I also like how you use Mac's point of view to describe the house instead of just telling the reader about it. Whoa! Major flashback to Deborah! Poor Mac, she really messed him up! And also including t...
- Thu Nov 18, 2021 7:41 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
First of all, thanks so much for posting that picture!! It certainly is a lovely area...if you're not sick with a cold, a bum shoulder and a bullet wound!! Yay!! Starkoss!! Major GX-1 flashbacks!!! Very neat idea to bring him in to help Nikki...and for Nikki to trust him. Seems as though Nikki's fee...
- Mon Nov 15, 2021 9:22 pm
- Forum: MacGyver
- Topic: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
- Replies: 201
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Re: Point Of View - A MacGyver FanFiction
Excellent chapter, and indeed quite a bit of research, historical and otherwise. I think you are the geography queen!! Oh, Mac is starting to rub off on Nikki as she's now listening to and beginning to follow her instincts. But she isn't wrong!! Great action and description in this chapter. At lease...