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Very well done! I'd say I'm sorry to see this journey end, but I am glad I won't have to read about Mac suffering so much!! As tvero80 said, I wouldn't be against reading more from you. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I know it was bit of a tough decision on your part, but it was the rig...

Very exciting chapter! Well done! Love the MacGyverism!! Looking forward to the conclusion!!

Poor Mac sure didn't get much rest! Of course, that's his own fault though of course he would insist on helping Pete find Willis. Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Pete and Mac!

So glad Mac has finally accepted Pete!! But he keeps pushing himself with wanting to investigate, hide his feelings, etc. He's made a lot of progress, but if he keeps this up I'm sure a setback is in his future.

Another great chapter! It's so good to see the "old" Mac returning! I KNEW he couldn't stay away from poking around the lab...he's too nosy for his own good!! So now he believes Pete is Pete, etc. but he's in physical danger again *sigh* Waiting patiently for more.....

I feel so sorry for Pete!! I think you write his character especially well! Also glad to see Mac healing physically, but they have to start getting into his head, after all, that weird brain of his is the biggest weapon he's got. Like Willis basically said, they've gotta let him be MacGyver!! Really...

I second what Jack(s) said about showing everyone's emotions. Obviously, this isn't just about Mac anymore. I also love that you're taking time to walk us through his recovery. Unfortunately, even though his is now physically healing, it sounds that perhaps the hardest part is yet to come as he deal...

I think this is your best writing yet!! So detailed, well-paced, and on-point with the characters. Again, I'm so glad to see Willis playing a bigger role. We know so little of him from the series so it's really interesting to read your version of him. You give some great insight into his character w...

:? Oh dear . We aren't going to fight over this, are we ? As uniquelyjas said ( and she knows what she's talking about since she's a writer too) this is just "fiction" (very well-) written by a fan ! No worries. I have no intention of starting an argument. I actually rarely post anything but felt c...

. There is no way on earth, in heaven, any other afterlife, in any universe or alternate or alternative universe or timeline that Mac would believe for half a microsecond that this is Pete. 2. He knows their methods and that they are trying to get to him emotionally and mentally. He would be trained...